Reworked "Remnants no. 004"
Following a critique of this piece and a lot of thought I reworked it, adding some more fabric and details to the sculptural top left area. The consensus was that in its original form it felt incomplete, unfinished and missing the kind of information I usually include that helps create a narrative. I think I was so caught up in the sculptural form of the work that I stopped working on it too soon.
Below is what the original looked like.
I would be interested in hearing your thoughts about this piece.
Or about reworking pieces in general.
"When is a work finished?"
"Will I ruin it if I keep going?"
"Do I stick with my original idea/intent or should I let the work dictate the progress?"